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Animator: aqil ramadhan

Description: Mixing dialogue

Experience: just a little bit

Time taken: 2 days

Comments:

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Marcus Taylor:

If you're looking to cut your camera angles, I'd suggest using the 180 degree rule so the changes aren't too jarring.

Adam Ellwanger:

Look into the 180 degree camera rule. This will help for your future shots with creating continuity.

Ken Ackerman:

lose the unnecessary camera flopping

Jyrki Kanto:

It's not advisable to jump from one side to another with the camera. (Frame 0 vs frame 100)

Kartikey:

It needs a lot facial work, the movement of some body parts could be more.. um better.

Alex Ang:

to animate dialogue its more in the lips and less in the jaw

Erin Goddard:

Camera jumps and cuts were quite confusing to watch. be careful of the 180 degree rule. Things like that easily distract from the animation itself. keep at it!

Richard Adams:

Very floaty, poor lip syncing. A sure sign you're letting the computer do too much of the in-betweening work.