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"Album recorded in India"

by Jarl

Final Rating: 4.49. Finished 52 out of 131 entries.

387 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Jarl

Description: Things go south at the recording studio

Experience: rigging professional by day, animation lover by night

Time taken: evenings and weekends

Comments:

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Michaela Wadzinski:

The lip sync is off but I like the energy of the movement a lot! Good work!

Eli Orr:

Looked good over all, especially with the more poppy animation style. Only thing I noticed is her mouth at the beginning seems very stiff. Maybe add more mouth movements in the future.

Jyrki Kanto:

The lipsync is off, but I like how the characters move.

Jessica Castillo:

I really like your acting choices here, and the overall animation is pretty smooth! Your lipsync seems like it's a little ahead of the audio though. The guy's mouth movements are also a little unclear. When I turn off the sound I can still tell what the woman is saying, but not what the guy is saying. I think if you put more emphasis on certain vowel sounds to make them pop and pay closer attention to when the mouth should be more open/closed it'll be more clear, like how it is when the woman pronounces the A in "ACCent." Nice work otherwise!

Lea:

It's a nice idea and your poses aren't bad, but it feels unfinished. The lipsync is off as well.

Szilard Hadobas:

Unfortunately it is way over-acted. Make sure the character is living while the other talks.

Eddie Higgenbottom:

i think it would be better if they continue their eye darts. She sneaks in and she shows it like an normal thing so does he.

Erin Goddard:

I like the fluidity of he body movements. the lip sync needs a lot more work to be believable. Keep working on it!