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An unfair contract

by Wang Yong

Final Rating: 5.07. Finished 38 out of 174 entries.

480 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Wang Yong

Description: The rate of unemployment is increasing, a man has no idea to chose the job that he want to do. The manager gave a job to him with an unfair contract, because she knows that the supply of the jobs do not meet the demand.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Nandini Kaura:

a lot of silence time before and specially after the dialogue is destroying your work .
and if the guy is your lead ,the problem is he doesn't look's convincing about his problem when he speaks .

Sandra Boogaards:

I enjoyed the story created from the dialogue.

Lea:

You could have left out the last part easily. It's a nice moment on its own but it didn't do much for your overall shot. Also the lipsync needs some work, but it's definitely a good effort.