Ethan Gettman:

You only have 11 seconds -- don't make the audience guess what the situation is. Remember the 3rd principle of animation: Staging.

Tobias Egeli:

acting wise i like the start. But after that it hard to read her feelings and not sure what she is thinking. I Think you should look into timing, and variation in timing, makes animation much more interesting and alive.

Lea:

There are some good thing going on here, but it would benefit from having raised the camera just a bit so as to not cut off the top of her head.

Mag Magnet:

I'm liking that aggressive pose after frame 230!