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Where Things Stand

by c.hickey

Final Rating: 4.31. Finished 67 out of 174 entries.

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Animator: c.hickey

Description: performance animation, take two.

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Ethan Gettman:

You only have 11 seconds -- don't make the audience guess what the situation is. Remember the 3rd principle of animation: Staging.

Tobias Egeli:

acting wise i like the start. But after that it hard to read her feelings and not sure what she is thinking. I Think you should look into timing, and variation in timing, makes animation much more interesting and alive.

Lea:

There are some good thing going on here, but it would benefit from having raised the camera just a bit so as to not cut off the top of her head.

Mag Magnet:

I'm liking that aggressive pose after frame 230!