Final Rating: 4.33. Finished 58 out of 100 entries.

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Animator: E'Dorian Guidry

Description: keep training and pushing yourself to higher limits and before you know it your efforts will take you through the roof

Experience: 3 years in school

Time taken: 3 weeks 5 days kinda still working on it

Comments:

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Melanie Fumey:

The camera movement is very hard to follow, and mess me a little. Maybe it is missing some anticipation/reactions of your movements but still a good animation :)

Kiran Jay Babla:

Bit floaty...

Louis Renard:

Those camera movements are so random, I can't really check the animation properly. but some actions seem really soft

Caitlin Cooke:

A little more weight to the movements would make this a lot more polished

Cuck Man:

The entire animation was floaty. Try to add some weight to the character to make it more believable.

Benjamin Berg:

I don't really understand what the story behind this is supposed to be. The jump through the floor needs more work. I would push the poses more on the launch and landing. Also, I would remove the slow motion at the end. It makes the animation feel off.

Danny Kneip:

The camera movement is very distracting.

Sergane Sariani:

It's pretty good, but there is something wrond with the feet near the end

Vijith:

He's gliding in frames 219-230.

Christopher Lovejoy:

A little less in/out movement of the camera would help a bit.