Final Rating: 5.71. Finished 22 out of 100 entries.

153 views including the voting period.

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Animator: James Winston

Description: A lady comes home early and catches her romantibot off gaurd.

Experience: few years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Joe Darko:

haha cool moves stewart!

Paris Hall:

I really enjoyed the idea, man!

Blond:

i like the idea, nice job

Eric Buval:

I like the idea. This didn't come out too bad! You could use a better handle on the fundamentals. Your timing/spacing is not great; a bit clunky/inconsistent

Jim P:

i watched 5 times. that last "ping"- i can't see the sword make contact on que. Original idea.

Patrick:

So good. But the spray bit at the end is unclear and confusing. Had the potential to be the best this month, but just a few are ahead of it I think. The sliding whilst cutting is brilliant btw.

Sergane Sariani:

nice idea, but more expressions on the face, and cleaner animations, clean poses so we know what's going on, the action is fast so it must be clear :)

kishan Rathod:

haha !! funny concept ..

Guillaume Gimbert:

Ha ha ha!

Danny Kneip:

Fresh idea and well animated! I wish Stewart was in a spotlight at the end because it's hard to see him - there's also an unfortunate shadow from the beam running across the floor which doesn't help.

Benjamin Berg:

Looking good! I would say that the ending could use some more work and creativity.

Christopher Lovejoy:

I love that the chunky splattering sound accompanies a romantic table setting appearing. The last shot only suffers from lighting a bit. I really enjoyed it. Watching for a 3rd time. Perhaps the initial movement should have given a hint that he's heard his date at the door; as it is he appears to decide to start his dance without any reason.

Anthony Fong:

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