Innoicence
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Ashwani:
good work nice idea!!
snehangshu:
nice job.good timing.good idea too..
Barnabas Boehler:
Heh, Interesting twist at the end!
One of the better ones I've seen so far.
Chris Sullivan:
AWESOME!!!!!
Sako Mahamadou:
nice idea
Ken Rice:
nice set up - however didn't know where to look at the end because of competing action from the 2 females.
Steve Schultz:
I love the ending!
India Barnardo:
Nice reveal!
Rob Redden:
That was funny! Great facial expressions!
Pete Shand:
haha nice concept
Cole Lemke:
I like the nose rub, but it covers her mouth while she talking. If you could move it a few frames to right after she finishes her sentence, I feel it would be more effective
Mariah:
Nice animation
Santiago Arellano:
Scary, but nice animation.
Theres some improvements you could do on the guy's lipsync especially with "Welcome to new york"
Good stuff
Raasi N:
This is good work.Really nice staging and acting.Keep up the good work.
Michael Cawood:
Beautifully restrained performance. Very believable.
Alessandro Pandolfi:
Nice work! Maybe you can improve the final staging, by cutting a little bit of dead space on the upper side, and shifting the left character far from the frame border.
Alex:
cool! scary place -- New York. :) i feel like the girl looks a bit off balance after the zoom out....
Jonathan Asselin:
Great job!!
Excellent animation control and not-too exagerated... Personally I prefer a little more push in terms of movements... But it's very personal, because the style is excellent! I really like your "evil man"! Maybe a tad too violent for me!
Way to go! Keep it up! :)
Alejandro Rodriguez:
Good use of gestures. I feel that the emotion is very believable. That said, i think you could work on her root more. I think she is just too stationary.
sharad kumar:
hmmmm........scary enough!
Olivier Ladeuix:
On the "welcome to NY" I would have moved the left arm first then move the right one instead of having them move pretty much at the same time.
He seems a bit frozen between NY and Thank you.
Instead of a cut between shot 1 and 2, I think you could have gone for a slow pan left to right with a zoom out instead,
really nice work.
Paulo Cesar Biajante:
great ideia!
Johnathan Scoon:
facial animation on the woman is excellent... especially the eyes... my only crit would be the last camera angle... the man's silhouette is not so visible against the car...
Wes Storhoff:
Really nice! Lipsync seems a bit off on "very far and long tonight."
Yasmin:
Great story.
Stephen Dahler:
nice work!! great gag at the end, id say possibly stage the main girl a bit more camera centric when it zooms out because she is kinda lost right now...keep up the good work
Sean Burgoon:
Nice reveal at the end. Made me laugh. The acting felt pretty good, just a little simple overall. Try challenging yourself more next time. You seem to have the animation talent, just focus on pushing your acting to the next level.
Simon Bean:
Nice animation overall. Lipsync seems to need a bit of work- either that or there's a bit of a lag on this avi :S Good job though
Andre de Villiers:
Looking good! I think the guy is holding his pose a little too long when he's got his hand up.. Also, his lipsync needs some refining.
Mike Courtney:
nice work
Tim Lobes:
Good follow through & overlapping
Daniel Huertas:
the "welcome to New York" is too cliche.. try to act it out and see if you do the same... nice job overal though
natalie:
um... interesting. Good ending.
deepak:
loved the character defined. cool finger animation. set design looks great too.
Guilherme Trog:
Hahaha The best one so far
Joan Delmont:
i like this one, funny ideas, good characters and good animation!
chloé:
hihi !
eejun:
I love it! nicely done animation! one of the best.









Animator: DINJITH
Description: The girl is unaware about the guy's intensions and he acts being good to trap her
Experience: 6 yrs
Time taken: 45 hours