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John Sheffield:
hehe, very cute. I laughed. :)
snehangshu:
lipsync out of track,the feeling in girls face dosnt match to the dialogue.otherwise its ok
Tash:
Cool animation characters and plot!
Andy Hass:
lol. Did you go to the trouble of making that wolf character just for that last moment? Kudos to you.
SamoRa G:
haha, i like the end... the lip sync need a bit of work though!
Steve Schultz:
good ending!
doc:
that was my idea. :)
Ken Rice:
Some nice expressive animation here, but I think your lip sync lets you down a bit (and the lips are moving too much - smooth them out some).
Bill Zebleckis:
funny ending..lip sync a little off though
Barnabas Boehler:
Cool!
Some of the gestures on Red are a bit too much...I think she should hold some her poses and not be constantly moving from one side to another. Otherwise...looking pretty good...although the ending happens rather fast as well.
Ashwani:
great effort but the female lip sinc is not satisfactory u can do more than this overall very nice
natalie:
Classic! Cool idea.
Raasi N:
A good start to end finish.Good performances of all the characters.I like the facial expressions of Red Riding Hood.Just a little suggestion,on the first frame,there is a smile on her face that does not go well with the mood.
Lavendra Love:
good job and too much face experiments
Michael Cawood:
Nice look to this one.
Jonathan Asselin:
Ahahah! Classic cartoon ending! I like it! :D
Fernando Porcel:
hahahahahh really funny , cool. Very original approach. Like the motion on the animation.I Tthink is a bit out of lip-sync, but is a really nice work! Cheers!
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
like sync kills it.. but thats good stuff.. great idea too.. and good acting choices.. this would of been really good if the lip sync was right
Federico Abib:
The main character is so sweet, I like the poses and the idea. Congratulations!
deepak:
lipsing looks off . acting looks rally nice and the character attitude too. nice story telling .
Curtis:
Cute Gag.
I like the characters, but red's head felt like jelly.. too much squash and stretch. Needs to be toned down alot. As well SQ&STR needs to be use to accentuate beats and not as part of the movements. It's secondary action.
Fun piece tho. Keep it up!
Andre de Villiers:
Better than Hoodwinked! Lipsync is totally off though.
Brad Regier:
cute concept
Mike Courtney:
cute concept
Ben Harper:
The lip sync feels a bit off here. I like the subtle squash and stretch in the face though. It really adds to the character. I think you should cut the wolf out..its a bit of a cheap gag.
Kent Wong:
Interesting idea! But Red Riding Hood 's facial expressions are overall weird and doesnt look worried or something. PLus the lips sync is off too. But overall gag is fresh n interesting.
Steve:
shes a little too bouncy and the lip sync is off, but it looks really nice, and it's a cute concept!
Zee Myers:
cute idea! i really like it. the 2nd guy was really nice. i don't know if this happened when you compressed or something but it feels like the entire animation and lip sync is a few frames behind the audio.
Kenny Roy:
The timing is a bit swimmy throughout. Try to bias your keys surrounding the golden poses a bit more. Also, when choosing poses to hit the strong beats of the dialogue, try not to pick gestures that are sign language, but rather illustrate 'frustration' more than "far and long"... Make sense?
Sergey B.:
AAA funny!!









Animator: Mariano Villegas Gonzalez
Description: ...in the wrong place.
Tanks to MartinMangiafave.com for the LowPoliMan !!!
Experience: 4 years on character animation
Time taken: In my spare time, some nights...