Ashwani:

good effort but just keep in mind the principles and then u got improvment

Michael Cawood:

Lots of timing and posing issues here.

Ken Rice:

good effort - animation is very floaty however, and the girl doesn't look like she's looking at the guy.

Alonso Soriano:

stiff. watch your staging, I don't see the advantage of his hand covering her face

Raasi N:

I think this piece of animation is not yet finished since the poses are just blocked and needs fine tuning with secondary animation.

Lavendra Love:

loose work in selecting backgrounds

Alex:

i like the gestures /compositon. esp. the guy listening witht two palms on table.. but needs getting rid of floaty anim. and when guy straightens back needs ease in /out., in my opinion..

Jonathan Asselin:

Maybe with a little more eye contact between the two of them we could see a better interaction. Also, I'm not sure of the camera angle here. They end up being too much on the right of the frame. Great background though! Way to go! :D

Santiago Montenegro:

make more poses.. to get more control over the characters.

Andre de Villiers:

Your characters aren't communicating! Look at the eyelines.. The negative space between your characters... etc.

Mike Courtney:

floaty

Brad Regier:

Fun shot!
Weird how her hand gets covered by his head...
Weird how he covers her face with his hand

Kenny Roy:

Having a large prop for the character to lean on can be a subconscious crutch. Next anim you do don't be afraid to frame a full body shot and 'stand-out' on your own, pun intended.

Ben Harper:

Needs some more work to get the kinks out, try to get some more life out of your poses. Use the whole body more and ease in and out of your key poses.

Andrew:

body is too stiff. hands and fingers need to be animated too. more expression in face