New York

Final Rating: 3.97. Finished: 36 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: David Lochhead

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Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 1 month

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chakravarma:

when she says THANQ.that expresiion is awesome man.

Leon Dexter:

A couple of twinned poses there on the girl, quite pose to pose. The guy is animated better, even the lip sync.

Andy Hass:

Good staging.

Gunjan Namdeo:

Good Effort

David Higgins:

Great facial work but there was a bit too much twining in here arm movements.

Ken Rice:

Nice render - however a little too much twinning going on with the girl I think.

Ashwani:

nice

Lavendra Love:

voice and acting are not matching

Amdbcg:

2nd character doesn't seem to move much, and some of the poses on main character (32, 274) look a bit contrived

Mark Persson:

Good work! Good movement and face expression. Lipsync to stiff... needs some more work on it!

Keep up with good work!

Olivier Ladeuix:

avoid the twinned poses

Fernando Porcel:

Cool animation. Perhaps a bit more lip-sync on the girl. Nice work! Cheers!

Tiffany Davern:

Nice camera move on the end. ^^

Her lip sync seemed just a hair off though.

Mike Courtney:

work on lip sync

Sunny Kharbanda:

Great effort! Work on your hand gestures, especially on making them asymmetrical and thereby more natural.

Andre de Villiers:

Nice! Needs a stronger pose on "help". Lipsync needs some attention.

dard:

The poses from frame 80 through 160 are a bit tweened.

chloé:

Good idea and nice animation. But the lips comes too late.