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Animator: Mike Courtney

Description: June Entry

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: Unknown

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Jesse Colucci:

Good job! I think everything is a bit too smooth and slow, but pretty realistic. His "Welcome to New York" doesnt seem to really hit, but the womans body expression on thank you is good.

Zee Myers:

Overall too floaty - needs stronger keyposing and holds

Mark Persson:

Nice!..... but it needs a lot of work more on it!

Keep up with the good work!

Lavendra Love:

behavior poses of character is not good through out the work

Andre de Villiers:

very floaty

Ken Rice:

Good effort here - very floaty though - you need some strong poses and some snap to your animation.

deepak:

animation looks liner and floaty. did u do it straight ahead ? when she touches the guy the force seems too strong.

Ian Jacobson:

It's not clear what the male character is doing with his arm gesture at the very end of the clip.

Santiago Montenegro:

fix the floatiness

Kenny Roy:

Posing is slightly cliche. Your workflow looks as though it would benefit from trying a much more pose-to-pose approach...

Stephen Dahler:

nice work, you should concentrate some more on hitting key poses to help sell her feelings, everything is a bit to floaty, if you weight it down youll have a nice feel to it.

Ashwani:

keep it up