The Greeting in NY
Comments:
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Jesse Colucci:
Good expressions and setup. The lipsync seems a little off and the movements a little slow. Good job though!
Steve Schultz:
The lip syncing could use a little touching up.
Good job
Lavendra Love:
gestures are good but not properly handled in acting
Raasi N:
The green guy's acting is readable in the beginning but the ending part looks doe snot looks clear.
Gunjan Namdeo:
need some work on movements
Mark Persson:
Nice work!
Keep up with good work!
Andre de Villiers:
Needs a strong pose on "help"
João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:
A little bit robotic!
Mike Courtney:
work on lip sync
Kenny Roy:
Little lack of focus on the characters. Use varied breadth of gestures to cast the viewer's eye where YOU want it.
Omri Navot:
your lip synch is a few frames behind the dialog
Ashwani:
nce
Fernando Porcel:
Nice animation.
Think the legs of the girl dont work with hips and torso, are just hanging. The position of the man hand over his hips is a bit strange, only a comment.
Ben Hatton:
I think the choice of model didn't do you any favours here, as it obscures the acting a bit.









Animator: Miyuki Maruyama
Description: Getting tired of a weird girl he met at the busstop.
Experience: About two years as a student
Time taken: About 45 hours