The Greeting in NY

Final Rating: 3.1. Finished: 63 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Miyuki Maruyama

Description: Getting tired of a weird girl he met at the busstop.

Experience: About two years as a student

Time taken: About 45 hours

Comments:

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Jesse Colucci:

Good expressions and setup. The lipsync seems a little off and the movements a little slow. Good job though!

Steve Schultz:

The lip syncing could use a little touching up.
Good job

Lavendra Love:

gestures are good but not properly handled in acting

Raasi N:

The green guy's acting is readable in the beginning but the ending part looks doe snot looks clear.

Gunjan Namdeo:

need some work on movements

Mark Persson:

Nice work!

Keep up with good work!

Andre de Villiers:

Needs a strong pose on "help"

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

A little bit robotic!

Mike Courtney:

work on lip sync

Kenny Roy:

Little lack of focus on the characters. Use varied breadth of gestures to cast the viewer's eye where YOU want it.

Omri Navot:

your lip synch is a few frames behind the dialog

Ashwani:

nce

Fernando Porcel:

Nice animation.
Think the legs of the girl dont work with hips and torso, are just hanging. The position of the man hand over his hips is a bit strange, only a comment.

Ben Hatton:

I think the choice of model didn't do you any favours here, as it obscures the acting a bit.