Ashwani:

greate effort!!

Barnabas Boehler:

Nice work!

The Double-take at the end is a little jerky though.

Also, I think the girl could have some more interesting gestures and variety in her movements...its' great that you aren't overwhelming us with poses, but it could use something a little more interesting too.

C. Ben Snell:

Good idea, but got confused with the ending.

Andy Hass:

So did he just get confused and hand her money instead of taking money?

David Higgins:

needs to be a little snappier

Jeff:

Hand gestures seem too much.

Pete Shand:

haha nice concept, lipsync didn't seem to be hitting tho

Lavendra Love:

wow payment of 5 and person returning 20 with object purchase; ah! he is not good shopkeeper

Raasi N:

Good concept.Nice work.

Andre de Villiers:

I liked the staging. Smooth out those curves and clean up the poses a bit and you're heading in the right direction! The rain is falling too slowly.

Jon Mummery:

You need a little work on the constraints between objects, but overall I really like the concept and idea of this piece. Good Luck!

Olivier Ladeuix:

I don't quite understand the story you are trying to convey,

Stephen Dahler:

Nice job, You have some nice staging here and nice camera work. Id say exaggerate the girls movements alot to really give the feeling she is in distress... keep at it!!

Curtis:

Some mechanics would help this out a lot. I think your acting choices are good. But lack of mechanics ends up hurting the performance.

Atics, Overshoot, Secondary, Action, Reaction, Squash, Stretch, Weight and timing...

Mike Courtney:

watch out for static hips

Eric Huelin:

The gag would have worked better if the cashier was holding the bill from the tip so that we could see the denomination.

Ben Hatton: