Welcome to New York!

Final Rating: 4.39. Finished: 25 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: David Trudel

Description: She is in New York for the first time and she is desperate of how people be with her.

Experience: almost 3 years

Time taken: around 2 weeks

Comments:

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Andrion Becker:

The girls arm kinda hits a brick when she brings it down on 39, some overshoot and settle would help that

Julien Abenhaim:

good job, good character interaction.

Mariah:

Great expressions!! I really felt like they meant what they said! Great job!

Ashwani:

nice

Lavendra Love:

its too fast work with timings

Andre de Villiers:

Great staging and solid idea! Needs some polishing here and there, but overall i liked it.

Roman Volodin:

Almost good :)
But they looking like robots
Maybe needs change camera position (at frames 51~175)

Santiago Montenegro:

good work

Brian Bredehoeft:

Good poses.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

i like it

Simon Bean:

lovely lipsync :D Check your codec though, it seems to lag a little :( I'd also avoid holding any poses as rigidly as you are here. Her arms appear a little robotic. Good job though, nice direction through the framing of your shots. Also... what's he pointing out of shot for? Remember to spoonfeed the viewer all the information they need. His pointing out of shot makes us think "what am I missing here?". If you want to gesture like that, you should really have a cut :)

Mike Courtney:

lip sync needs work