MJ meets Spidey

Final Rating: 4.63. Finished: 18 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Jeffrey Lee

Description: MJ has just been rescued by our friendly neighborhood superhero for the first time. At least my interpretation of it. =]

Experience: More or less 3 years.

Time taken: On and off for a week.

Comments:

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Mike Hoffman:

Great idea!

David Alvarez:

Hey I like very much the overall pose of the girl. The lipsync is not working for me and spidy need more work.

Jeffrey Lee:

i have a newer, less stiff version of this, i just couldn't upload it =T Oh well.

Michael Cawood:

Nice idea.

brandonbeckstead:

Fantastic idea! I would love to see you hit a few stronger accents and really focus on showing what they are thinking.

Michael Shin:

Her look and gestures are really cute. However, the lipsync is a bit off. And, the spiderman moves like a robot. In my opinion, if you make his head move a little smoother, it will be great! Very nice job, tho.

Zee Myers:

First one to make me laugh! :) It falls apart a bit towards the end - even though his head is just bobbing back and forth, a little bit better timing would really sell it, and then her "thank" sync is off, but her acting in the beginning is very funny!

Leon Dexter:

Haha, I like the theme, and the end of Doc oc's metal limb on her, but appart from the swing it doesn't look like the lower half of their bodies move. Nice idea.

Tash:

cool stuff

Andy Hass:

Nice idea.. I wish a little more was going on in the shot though.

C. Ben Snell:

Nice idea, but the lip sync seems off.

Walker Sultzbach:

I like the concept.

Charles H:

clever idea! I think you could of done much more with it though

Barnabas Boehler:

Cool Ideas!

doc:

great concept

Mariah:

Nice idea, but it would benefit from more actual acting and movement and lip sync.

Andrew:

hey where'd you get the spiderman rig?

Cameron Huber:

The setup is pretty wicked, although I feel like the movements are far too minimal. It's good having spidey barely moving because otherwise he'd be distracting, plus it sort of helps to set up that feeling of surprise he has. I feel that the woman's facial shapes are too floaty, and it's often hard to see her really sound out certain letters like m, w or v. Keep pushing it!

Lavendra Love:

good idea but face expression are shown look like a old lady is talking

Ken Rice:

Nice animation - felt it was a little uneventful though and could do with a little snap overall (in the mouth too).

Raasi N:

Nice animation and scenario.

Christiaan Moleman:

I love the gestures, especially the touch at the end. Nice work.

Jonathan Asselin:

Ahahah!!

EXCELLENT idea!! The quote fits perfectly with the personality of our favorite friendly neighbor! Overall, we really can feel you had fun with this!

I would've liked to see some "you're a bit heavy" feeling in the animation of spidey to get a better sense of holding her weight... Now he seems a little too static, but hey, isn't he radioactive? (kidding!) :D

I really like the subtle balancing on the web! Way to go! I want more!!

Olivier Ladeuix:

interesting idea, I would have liked to see the entire body involved a bit more especially on the spider man character

Brian Bredehoeft:

That is an awsome idea!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

good idea.. spiderman baby

Curtis:

hahaha Nice spidey outfit!

Great idea!

Add some weight to the whole thing. She moving but his arm is perfectly still. Pluss they're hanging from webbing. All the moves she makes should tanslate through her, to spide, and to the web.

I enjoyed this ver much tho. Thanks!

Andre de Villiers:

Great concept! Nice staging and smooth animation. Push the expressions a bit more. Look for a stronger pose on "nice to me.." Have her place her right hand on his chest at the end. Tilt her head.

Brad Regier:

I love this one.
Maybe the broken restraint on her wrist could be more obviously a rope or chain, because it's a bit confusing.
Great concept!

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Kenny Roy:

Cute gag, though she really doesn't move all that much. With such a clever setup, you should go way too far with it and then pull it back a little, rather than noodle it until deadline.

natalie:

They look quite alright together. Cool.

kEViN:

cool idea!

Jasmine Bobe:

I love spidey! =) this is a cute idea but there bodies seem to be pinned at the hips.. There should be more movement there. And i cant really get a sense of how her weight is pulling on him as the hang from his web..

Jurriaan Hos:

nice idea! I'd add some motion to the couple swinging when she moves, or maybe even let her slip a bit and struggle.

Kent Wong:

initially i was thinking it is very interesting idea of the scene setup and character choice, but so little animation is happening and the lips sync is weird n off. Overall looks weird and not so interesting anymore. sorry .. but i must say the main hugging pose is strong n well read.

Ashwani:

nice

Paul Blais:

strange mouth...definitely strange...