brandonbeckstead:

This is very overacted, I think you are hitting too many poses, just my opinion.

Cameron Huber:

A good effort but I feel that a lot of the poses are pushed too far, almost like a melodrama. Some of them feel a little cliche' - such as her saying "very far and LONG tonight". You're hitting a lot of the beats but because there aren't many breakdowns or pauses in spacing, it's giving the animation a very linear feel. I'd say go through and refine the poses, try experimenting with new ones, and work on more breakdowns in between each acting choice. Good start, just keep going!

David Higgins:

Very theatrical but a little too much twinning for my taste.

Jeff:

Hand gestures and body movement seem too much.

Andre de Villiers:

Hmm, give the lipsync some polishing. Snapping knees!

Amdbcg:

should probably have acted this one out - lipsync is off, and the movement isn't fluid/natural

Derek:

acting choices are too big.

Curtis:

Acting doesn't really fit the dialogue. As well this piece could use more fundamentals.

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Mike Courtney:

they are going through a lot of poses, but I don't see the character's reasons for it

Omri Navot:

get more expression out of your characters' poses

natalie:

Way too affected...

Ashwani:

nice

Paul Blais:

needs more context