Lost in the big apple
Comments:
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Paul Holmes:
Ha, great use of the big buck bunny rigs. good idea too.
Michael Cawood:
Floaty ears, and some over simplified lipsync, but there's still lots of good stuff in here.
Zee Myers:
Some good ideas and poses; the idea of him looking after people in the beginning is a nice animation idea but it doesn't really match with the voice, which feels focused on a single person.
Andy Hass:
I might have kept the eyes engaged throughout the line, looks like she zones out until the other character comes in. The viewer is pretty much going to be locked onto the character's eyes (especially since there is just one in the shot) and when they disengage and aren't telling us anything, we lose interest fast.
Barnabas Boehler:
Hey Not too bad...where did you get these models? Did you work on that Blender short...are these models up for public download now?
The main thing I noticed is the cat's tail..I think the movement should be more subtle
thomas reardon:
Cool bunny.
Steve Schultz:
I like the reaction of the bunny when she says "thank you"
Stefano:
The walk cycle of the squirrel should be improved. It seem like it stops at every step, which is kinda unnatural. I would make it more uniform
Laurento Jovito Fua:
nice... that was great. very convincing acting/animation.. i have a little problem with the cat's tail though.
Phil:
Hey I like it and not only because it was made in Blender :)
Ken Rice:
Well done getting BBB into the competition - you beat me to it. Lots of improvements over the course of your WIP - good stuff.
Ashwani:
good
David Higgins:
Surprised to find that I could vote for my own! After seeing it in comparison to all the others I must say that it was pretty average so rated it as such.
Raasi N:
I like the big,fat bunny's performance .The walk cycle of the little brown guy walking from left looks a bit jerky.Overall a good piece.
Andre de Villiers:
Great characters! Animation seems quite floaty. Introduce some clear poses with moving holds and contrast in pace.
Mark Persson:
Nice!!! Love idea of Alice in the wonderland! Lipsync to smal and to slow i think. If u could speed up some movement on the big rabbit.
Could zoom in a bit also... more easier to see the character and the lipsync.
Keep up with good work!
Amdbcg:
that was awesome! :P
lipsync was slightly off in places , but over all, I liked it :D
Olivier Ladeuix:
Blender? too bad the voice doesn't work very well with the rigs, good effort
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
its alittle floaty.. the hands would float during idle poses..its good to have them moving but you should define it.. good work
Tiffany Davern:
Wow! Awesome! Lip sync, animation, everything! And the bunny as the girl is pretty funny. Made me giggle. Very well done.
Ryan King:
nice I was hoping someone would use these rigs. Are they easy to use?
Chris Burel:
The camera move when the 2nd character comes in is distracting, because the camera moves, the 2nd character comes in, and the rabbit has this big reaction on the complete opposite side of the screen. It's difficult to know where to look.
Curtis:
The cat walking was really under sold.
Great acting on the bunny. very funny! Clever idea too!
Mike Courtney:
the cat's walk cycle needs some overlapping action
natalie:
He s a very cool she. I sure laughed. (Long Live Blender)
Omri Navot:
really cute! good job. work on the lip synch
kEViN:
nice idea... The motion was a little awkward though.
Kent Wong:
the walkcycle of the rodent is a bit jerky. The lip sync of the BBBunny is off. The shocking part is not natural, looks like rubber stretching . Need more offset and overlap. But overall idea of approaching is not bad though.
Joan Delmont:
When your character is walking, keep the speed of the spine ( the "bassin" in french...sorry ) constant, it will be better.
Santiago Montenegro:
the animation need a bit more of overlap.









Animator: David Higgins
Description: Lost and alone, she pleads for help but is ignored - in the most part.
Experience: Hobbiest
Time taken: 20-30hrs