thomas reardon:

Really nice work overall. Movements flow in a believable way. Her turn should be slower and more forlorn, it comes off as being rushed.

David Higgins:

Loved it. The only think I didn't like was the timing of the mans open armed pose. It would have worked better on 'welcome'

natalie:

Cool characters. But everything else is a bit.. unwarranted.

Mariah:

Finally, someone getting the end expression right on her! She actually looks like those words would be coming out of her mouth.

Lavendra Love:

concept is good but trolly in scene not matching

venkatesh:

fine yaa very fine good effective have this clip .and this clip have a life in animation
excelent facials, dialouge jaw move ment ,excelent fallow throwes fine very nice

Brian Bredehoeft:

The timing on the gril is a little slow. She does not seem as desperate as her voice is leading on.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the symmetry with the hands didnt look right.. the w pose was used alot..

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

Wow!
Perfect Animation!

Ryan King:

It was a little shakespearean but in a good way. Not too over the top. The thing that kills it is right at the end her hands are clasped and the translate forward as if they were atop of a cane. Or supposed to be on top of the cart. Not sure. But it is a little glaring for an otherwise smooth animation. Good job.

Chris Burel:

The motion is really nice and smooth, but it feels a bit overacted.

Andre de Villiers:

Nice! You're using the same kind of hand gestures three times, try to avoid this. I't also twinning. Kudos for keep your characters' feet moving! Just needs some more weight adjusting in the hips..

Simon Bean:

Love the guy's subtle response. For me the girl's over-acting isn't believable (the illustration of the word's "walking around tonight" just isn't necessary) The animation's nice- you've definitely got skills... I'd advise to next time act the scene out, show it to someone and ask if it looks true to the scene. Hope that helps, good job :)

Mike Courtney:

think of cause and effect, if the girl stops because she sees the man, then she needs to see the man before she stops

Mike Hoffman:

I love her turn. Watch the arc on her head though.

Tim Lobes:

facial expressions aren't working as well as they should

Kenny Roy:

A little too repetitious in your pose choices. You're timing works well, and you attempted a lot. Just focus on creating a natural flow of gestures that seems to come with ease.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Good effort, but try and avoid using literal gestures that indicate exactly what the character is saying. In reality, people rarely gesture everything they're saying.

Ashwani:

nice

Guo WenZHeng:

very good work.
keep it up

Paul Blais:

good animation, but poor storyline

chloé:

Good animation. But the girl moove like a litlle boy at the start, and when she's walking.