Chris Sullivan:

It just seems too slow.

Ashwani:

good

Andy Hass:

Is this somewhere between 12-15 fps? This has an interesting style, feels a little like stop-motion.

C. Ben Snell:

Body movement seems very stiff. Good start one the lip sync.

Ken Rice:

Nice render you've got there - female's poses seem samey throughout and she freezes just after the half way point and her fingers rarely move.

Barnabas Boehler:

I like how subtle the preacher is...you're keeping him alive but not taking our focus away from the talking character! That's tough to do...at least I always have troubles with it.

I think you should get more variety in the girl's gestures and dialogue too.

Cameron Huber:

Pretty good, but I think you could have pushed some of the beats and mouth shapes... it feels a little too neutral at the moment.

Cole Lemke:

The male need move movement; he is too static from the neck down.

Santiago Arellano:

Animation looks good!

The line "Yeah well!" could use a little more punch when the father says it, maybe on the lipsync or in the body gestures.

But, other than that, looks smooth!

Lavendra Love:

toon style background looks good but its very fade does not match with the condition second character it still for too much time

deepak:

could've come up with more movement coz . o sound is not distinct in lipsing. slight finger movements in places might add someting great in acting.

Mark Persson:

Good work... love the background... but it is night at this moment though. the movement and the lipsync feels to smal... maybe could make it quite bigger!??

Keep up with good work!

Christiaan Moleman:

You need to be careful not to freeze your poses so much. The priest especially could some secondary action with the book, shifting his grip etc. Try and change the way he holds it a bit when he turns to talk for example.

Jonathan Asselin:

A little too static for me... Great background though! :)

Brian Bredehoeft:

You have a good idea, but you need to exagerate the movments more. Also you need anticipation. Right now the characters are floating to much. Try pausing a little more between poses.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

lacks movement.. i dont mean brodmevement.. i mean movement that makes it look alive. good work though.. i like how you mixed the background into that shot.. good use

Stephen Dahler:

very nice suttleties

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

Freeze?
Them freeze when the other talk, is strange!

Curtis:

This piece is really stiff. animation fundamentals are missing.

check out The Animators Survival Kit but Richard Williams, best book on animation out there.

Nice try! Keep practicing!

Andre de Villiers:

You need some more stronger poses to spice things up a bit, there's not so much going on at the moment. Push the lipsync a bit more, don't be scared of exaggerating!

Mike Courtney:

nice work, female becomes static at times

Sunny Kharbanda:

Acting's a bit unclear: Why does she smile when he just walks off like that? Is she SO frustrated that a simple "welcome" makes her happy? In that case, we need to see that frustration in her movements.

Paul Blais:

too rigid?

Zee Myers:

Nice! Just would have liked to see her move a little more, she seems a bit frozen in one place

Santiago Montenegro:

the animation is good.. I think it needs a bit of speed(breakdowns) but only is my opinion

Jonathan Gonçalves:

slow movements, not atchup with the sound i guess...