Wes Storhoff:

Great expression on guy's face at around 150! You're on the right track.

Jesse Colucci:

Good job, but their mouths seem a little square. I really like the guy's expression at the end. One small thing- between frames 268 and 269, her body seems to move sideways quite a bit. nice job overall.

David Higgins:

Is it actually possible to bend your wrist like that?

Lavendra Love:

try to eat pose is totally wrong

Raasi N:

Good attempt !

Alejandro Rodriguez:

Good effort man. I'd take a look a t core animation first. Both characters are very static, and their arms move independently from their bodies

Ian Jacobson:

Try acting out the male character because his hand is backwards. No one eats a hot dog like that.

Yasmin:

There were a lot of floaty movements as well as some "pop" jerks that conveys the message but could have been a little smoother.

Curtis:

Over all very stiff and floaty. I think the poses are right, but close attention to fundamentals will defenitely loosen this up and really sell the piece.

Nice try! Keep up the great work!

Andre de Villiers:

That's not how you hold a hotdog...

Mike Courtney:

eliminate pops

Kenny Roy:

Next anim you attempt try doing one character, full body, talking to another off screen. It seems to me you should focus on full body mechanics at the moment.

Ashwani:

nice

Vedanth Rajan:

nice try! need alot of work,

also the hand of the green shirt looks broken when he puts the hotdog to his mouth between frame 240-260!

Jonathan Gonçalves:

its a bit confusin when he supposedly will eat the hotdog his hands its out...
and about frames 268 -269 she slid the budy a little awkward