Welcome to New York

Final Rating: 3.6. Finished: 48 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Tash

Description: Referenced from the movie "Enchanted" and personal clips

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: mm.... a week or so altogether (not sure)

Comments:

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Andy Hass:

What is she looking at? Why isn't she addressing the guy?

Tash:

Surely one shouldn't vote for themselves??

Fernando Porcel:

Is a nice animation but with a problem on the staging and edition. The girl is talking to the right (left for she) and up. At first instance I think " She is talking with a really big guy... " ... and .... cut ... open shot ... and the second character is at left of the screen ! :D That confuse a bit.

Jesse Colucci:

The guy's smile to puzzled look is awesome.

David Higgins:

Lip sync if off and the movement is a little mushy.

Cameron Huber:

Be careful with your lip shapes. If you have too many, it begins to look rapid and snappy, and we fail to see holds on the m's, b's and p's. The girl's movements feel a little linear. Tighten up your breakdowns so they read clearer and don't take so long to occur. Because the timing is slower, the movement feels floaty. A good setup and a nice effort though, keep at it!

Ashwani:

good

Raasi N:

Good subtle performance of the girl.

Lavendra Love:

fingers in hand not used properly of second characters

Ken Rice:

Good effort here - lip sync is out and your mouths are moving to every syllable - look at someome talking and you will see that their lips don't open and close so much. Animation is a bit floaty too.
Good stuff

Andre de Villiers:

Hmm.. did you start with the lipsync?

Mark Persson:

Good work!

Stephen Dahler:

nice work!! id say that you dont need all the mouth movements for every syllable, its a bit to distracting, try to hit only the key words and fill in where others are needed. keep it up!!

Gregory Marlow:

Animation is not bad at all. I have to say though I was confused when the guy showed up on screen left when she was talking toward screen right.

Mike Courtney:

continuity error, she speaks to her left at the beginning, but the guy is on the girls right side

Tim Lobes:

Lipsync needs work

deepak:

fingers in the starting frame is stiff . rested hand in the man doesnt move with the body which looks stiff too. hip looks floaty in places. but nice try.

Stephen:

Looks good, but I think some of the motion seems a little choppy and the lip-sync doesn't quite appear correct.

tq:

good try

natalie:

She s literally moving emotions with her hands.