New York New York
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shruti:
love the "she's no good" face on the guy in the end :)
chakravarma:
i like the expression of male rig in last 274 frame.but too much snappy also not good.i think u used in female rig.when female character hold the hand of him in 41 frame is toooo much snappy..
Michael Shin:
You have some nice poses. But when the lady talks at first, the guy moves too much; therefore, viewers can get lost. Also, both characters move too sitff. Nicely done, tho.
David Higgins:
Her lip sync was off. Nice staging though.
Cameron Huber:
The movements are timed fairly well but there is little, if any, overshooting. There needs to be more easing in and out of the poses. The acting choices are fairly good. I probably wouldn't do the hands raised in the air, but the rest feel pretty good. Nice effort, keep at it!
Pete Shand:
looks nice, some of the girls acting choices didn't seem to mesh tho
Lavendra Love:
she should be sad in mood not angry
Andre de Villiers:
What's going on with her eyes? The lipsync is way off.
Amdbcg:
main character's emotions do not match her voice
Mike Courtney:
girl's left hand goes through car
natalie:
I like her as much as her animated partner does. In simple words - his facial expression was really cool.
Ashwani:
good
Mark Persson:
Good work... all basic movement for the girl are good. but the body language is still to hard and stiff... needs to smoothen out some.
The lipsync are not synced and the face expression also litle bit too hard... need more work with that!
Love the hand touch... though. Things like that creats energi in the anim!D
Keep up with the good work!









Animator: funda
Description: My firs entry to the 11 second club.
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: about 2 week