Lis Mitchell:

I like the little tracing thing she does with her finger on the counter.

Jeffrey Lee:

You're idea is there! I can see it. You need to work on your poses more. Spend a little bit more time giving use an interesting pose. And don't be afraid to hold your character still. Especially the arms. They're very floaty. Hope that helps. Good luck.

Chris Sullivan:

His actions seem too slow.

Sherif Nagib:

You could've had a bitter composition if you had the guy out of focus at start or som

chakravarma:

need to work on lip sync

Barnabas Boehler:

I think you need to push your lip-synch and mouth movements a little bit more. There are times when it doesn't look like any of the characters are talking and its hard to tell where the dialogue is coming from.

Also, you could try to exxagerate and add more variety in your time. Right now everything i mostly happening at the same pace. (like when male takes a drink and is slowly moving his head in the beginning)

Raasi N:

Timing is off when the girl says ..."nobody's been very nice to me".

Alex:

nice bar scene! needs a lot more work on sync/ getting rid of floatiness I think...

Pete Shand:

love at first sight?

Olivier Ladeuix:

really floaty. Before you go to spline, a good start would be to have only 4/5 frames of transition between the poses rather than 24 frames

Brian Bredehoeft:

To much floating. Try defining your poses more.

Kenny Roy:

Focus on one character at a time, and realize the audience can only look at one thing at a time. I can only imagine that if you hadn't included the bartender, you may have had some much needed time to improve the gestures on the other 2 chars.

Stephen Dahler:

nice work!!! a bit floaty, work on the body weight a bit and that should help your movements and poses

Andre de Villiers:

Use some stronger poses and go more extreme with facial expressions. Fix the dude's right elbow.

Mike Courtney:

bit floaty in places

Omri Navot:

really floaty

natalie:

Decent characters. But they seem to exist in order to subscribe this contest and not because they have a story to tell.

Ashwani:

nice

Andrew:

everything is too spliney. some quicker movements woulda been nice

Ben Hatton:

Did she spike his drink?