Jesse Colucci:

This is good. On "I was looking for some help", the bent knee to hip swing looks a little awkward. In general, the girl is slouching a lot. The guy's movements are more fluid. Cool.

chakravarma:

Ha Ha Ha ..he slaps...

Leon Dexter:

Haha, made me laugh but it does need a lot of work. It's very pose to pose, try some more overlapping action.

SamoRa G:

lol

David Higgins:

Poses are a little wild and over acted

Pete Shand:

Good work, have a look at twinning and try to avoid it!

doc:

well it the bouncing, hip movement and the pat on the butt that throws me

Lavendra Love:

she is talking or dancing its confusing

Andre de Villiers:

Nice animation on "wandering"... The rest seems a bit rushed and some of the poses look awkward. Zoom in a bit!

Yasmin:

Nice add on in the end.

Mike Courtney:

nice work in progress, keep working on it

Kenny Roy:

Overly broad gestures are leaving little in the way of rhythm in this animation.

Omri Navot:

cool poses, but your timing needs some work, and the camera angle doesn't help tell the story

martoon:

Try not to move them so much, looks like Saturday night fever :P

Paul Blais:

Yeah sure...

Santiago Montenegro:

Fun idea!