David Alvarez:

Congrats for your entry. I think the staging needs some work and overall poses should be stronger.

Mark Persson:

Nice!

Keep up with the good work!

Jeff:

Hand gestures seem too much.

Lavendra Love:

characters are dancing or acting don't know

Derek:

poor staging. Fix your cameras

Santiago Montenegro:

Good work...I think needs a bit more of acting but is good.

Stephen Dahler:

nice, a little floaty but not bad otherwise

Tiffany Davern:

Very nicely animated! Lip sync, everything! The sound is a little distorted, but that's minor, it's the animation that counts here, right?

Andre de Villiers:

Twinning arms - have some poses with one-handed gestures to mix it up. Watch your elbow arcs. Mouths move like puppets' mouths, try looking in a mirror when doing lipsync... Animation is quite floaty, use strong poses with moving holds.

Mike Courtney:

female's steps need work

natalie:

They are both sweet.

Ashwani:

good