Barnabas Boehler:

Hey!

Not bad, but I would try to focus on and simplify your best storytelling poses.

doc:

good but they seem like dolls.
and voice seems off.

Andrion Becker:

too many poses

Traci Plagmann:

You have a nice start but there's a lot of hand gestures in here and it starts to get distracting.

Adam Waters:

need some cuts. can see the guy on the other ends face

Lavendra Love:

too much movements looks good but very few efforts on facial expressions

Alex C:

Good effort. It feels overacted I think, if you didn't already, maybe try recording yourself acting it out in the role to get a better sense of what the body and arms would do. Her mouth stops before she finishes saying "Nice to me". I like the sincerity of the handshake.

Jose D.:

too many poses

Ken Rice:

good effort here - I think the female is throwing her arms around too much though: you have a gesture for every word. I don't think it works having her look into the camera - I think she should be talking to thecamera throughout or to the other character throughout.

deepak:

acting looks nice but lipsing doesnt look clear. mouth hardly does open wide and the o shape is not distinct. . stiff in some places but acting is good to me

Jon Mummery:

I really like the way you move her through the scene, but possibly she moves a little too much. She looks at the camera at one point, which looks like she is pleading witht he audience which doesn't quite work for me. Also the hand doesn't grab properly when they shake... There are also three or four times where she has both arms open wide at the same time and this would be better to use different poses, especially at the end when she says 'thankyou'. Really nice work though.

Andre de Villiers:

Totally overanimated! Staging is unclear.. is she talking to the camera in the beginning? The lipsync isn't there yet.

Simon Bean:

woah! wayda overact! CALM DOWN WITH YOUR POSES!!!

Alex:

cool. i like the handheld feel .. "help" is nice --but gestures can be toned down, i think.. .. also smile never goes away.
overall good job!

Ian Jacobson:

I think you are trying to get too many poses in...just keep it simple.

Cameron Huber:

Too many acting choices. If you boil it down to about 1/3 of the amount you have it will be a lot more powerful. Not a bad effort though!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

its too snappy.. and you definitly have too many story telling poses there.. reduce it down to justa few.. seemed as if you had a pose on every word there

Stephen Dahler:

very nice work!!! you really get some nice poses in here. the only thing id say is she is a little to active in the shot, if you lessen her body movements a bit it should help you out a bit, other than that awesome work!!

Gregory Marlow:

Way too many gestures.

Pete Shand:

i think she's over gesturing here, she doesn't need to communicate every second word with her hands

Mike Courtney:

very linear actions, look at your arcs

Kenny Roy:

A little frantic with the gestures. Take a few of those poses out and work within the pose a bit.

Tim Lobes:

Face seems dead (eyes)

Omri Navot:

good camera work. Timing is a bit too fast

Fernando Porcel:

Nice animation.
Much movement with the girl's arms with no pauses, that creates a flat timing on the girl and the poses cant read easly. For example when the girl finish her speak and shake the mans hand, looks like an automatic action without emotion or intention. Only a comment. Cheers!

Tim W:

Seems a bit over exaggerated. Taking out those hands gestures on "you see", "and long", "bodies been" and the "you" part in "thank you" would probably do wonders for this piece.

Mark Persson:

Good work! Very good character movement. That the strong side of it!
...but the main character needs more work on the face expression and the lipsync. She seems to stiff in the face... she is to happy all the time.
Some of the movement are litle bit to fast. if u could slow it down some!

Keep up with good work!

Sunny Kharbanda:

Avoid having your characters guesture everything they say. People simply don't do that, and so it seems unnatural. Instead, let the guestures come from how they're feeling. Keep observing people, whether they're (good) actors, or real people in real situations (which rules out all the "reality" shows ;) )

Ashwani:

nice

Guilherme Trog:

Too many poses hehe

Joan Delmont:

too fast and too much move... And some move are repeat. The girl seem to be very happy in your anim, but in the sound, she sad....

Jonathan Gonçalves:

it seems like she was happy all the time, not frustrating....