Chris Sullivan:

nice job!

Jeffrey Lee:

Pretty good stuff. Great subtle facial stuff. Arms are a bit floaty. Pick some better poses with the hands. Hope that helps. Cheers and good luck.

Michael Cawood:

The lipsnc seems a bit loose. It looks like she could have moved her eyes away from him before she shows her surprise that way it would have been stronger when she looked at him.

C. Ben Snell:

Would like to see the other character.

Ken Rice:

Nice subtle animation - a tad floaty here and there.

Brian Bredehoeft:

Very well done. Needs work on lip synch.

David Higgins:

Lip sync was good but there was no emotion in the face.

Mariah:

It's all right animation, but her attitude doesn't seem right. She seems more sad and laid back than the vocal portrays. Also, it would have been nice to have the guy animated as well.

Santiago Arellano:

Good stuff, the animation needs a little bit of polish, but it's very clear everything you want to show and do.

The only thing I personally don't like much is the character grabbing his one arm, it's a little bit cliche, people do all sorts of wierd and different things when they're nervous or afraid, its all about looking for it, and finding something that you feel true and real, instead of doing something you've seen in other animated films.

OR MAYBE youre going "What are you talking about idiot, my grandma grabs her arm all the time like that" :D

Ashwani:

good job

Andrew:

good work on this character but i would like to see more story. what's going on with the guy she's talking too? why did she say thank you?

Jamie Jannaway:

Try to keep the animation a bit more snappy, right now the bodily action is very smooth and drawn out.

Mark Persson:

Nice work.... needs some more movement. Lipsync very good but still to slow.

Keep up with good work!

Alex:

very nice nuances in the face.. esp eyes..

Stephen Dahler:

nice work, id probably have some more exaggerated movements to really show the worry in the voice. also showing the other character might help...good job

Ryan King:

You have some really nice stuff going on in the face. The body anim is nice but because of the size of the hands it distracts alot. I know it's cliched but women tend not to be too appealing with big hands. maybe I'm old fashioned. One thing that caught my eye was the brows. The tend to maintain one pose and shift up and down the face. You have really nice facial changes. Well made and well timed. You obviously put alot of care into it. A little more work on the brows would really seal it. The come off a little bouncy. The hand anim like I said is nice it is subtle but because of their size it comes off big. But that can't really be avoided unless you didn't show them and then you lose the acting. There is a point near the beginning however that it looks like the shoulders are globally positioned and when the body moves they briefly appear to maintain position in global space (the move back at frame 60-ish). Otherwise it is looking really nice

Curtis:

Everyone misses that little breath she takes before she says thank you. It's great opportunity to sell her distress.

Good effort! keep it up!

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Simon Bean:

Great work on the eyes. Mouth shapes could do with more definition / separation

Ben Harper:

The eyes are nice, and they give great expression, but i feel that the mouth movements are a bit off, its most notable when she says "thank you".

Andre de Villiers:

Needs Poses.