Ashwani:

keep working

Andy Hass:

Her entering frame and hugging the bust is a great ending.

C. Ben Snell:

That got a little weird.

Ken Rice:

good effort - I feel you animation jumps around a lot though.

Cameron Huber:

Too many camera cuts. I found it very confusing when the head spoke because of the other characters you have on screen moving around. Keep it to one, MAYBE two shots and keep the secondary characters fairly still. Show that they're really bored or confused with her, and set up the statue from the beginning so we're prepared for it. I would have liked to have seen a few more holds from the girl... she seemed to be constantly moving. A good effort though, keep at it!

Barnabas Boehler:

Cool Idea. having the headpost talk...er...head statue..whatever that is.

I think could be improved upon a lot if you took out some of the broad actions and acting that female does. Really simplify and narrow it down to one or two basic poses and try to work within those.

Santiago Arellano:

The first thing to comment on is the staging. The statue is not visible in any of the three shots he's in before he talks, I didn't noticed him because the girl is moving and attracting my attention. My suggestion would be, giving him a different color, because he blends in with the background very easily, and in the second shot have the two guys leaning agains the statue, and then when the statue speaks, the guys get scared and the girl comes in.

On other suggestions: Tone down the number of poses in the girl when she says "And I'm afraid..." there's a lot of them, work with one or two, so that we read them clear and it's not "one pose per beat"

Andrew:

whoa, didn't expect that!

Lavendra Love:

nice concept too many use of camera angles

Andre de Villiers:

A bit overanimated and floaty

logu:

concept is good,and i thing need more animation, other wise good............

Pete Shand:

LOL, nice, very random. I think some of the acting might have been a bit melodramatic

Olivier Ladeuix:

overacted, go for something more subtle

Fernando Porcel:

Nice approach and concept. I think the poses of the girl are a bit on the overacting way. Nice work! Cheers!

jodie:

First thing

natalie:

4 characters? Way too crowded.