Deanna Bishop:

Great emotion.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

First part has some good acting. The sigh and second phrase could use some work.

Ryan Hobbiebrunken:

Great job! Great pose to start out with! I'm not crazy about that little hand tap, it looked a bit forced to me. Great job overall!

John T. Coomey:

Nice job.. Seems like some bloke miming to a girls voice. Throw some lip stick on him and some eye shadow... haha

The poses on 112 and 124 are a little weak and take from your otherwise good work

Kai Huai:

The thing that bother me most is the left hand fingers. they looks too stiff. as the hand goes the finger should move along ..

Steve Sloan:

not bad, i like the details like the tap with the fingers. the sigh needed more work though. although that rig makes it difficult to emphasize.

Shahbaaz Shah:

Great movement and acting. Some reason the slight pop on "living" stands out to me and I think the breathing portion could be loosened up overall. But working really well for me overall. Great piece.

Michael Slater:

Like the hand tap on the table. Nice follow through. Good, overall.

Dwarakanath Jnaneswar Ekkirala:

a bigger head accent on "A life" is what I would add IMO.. Other than that.. looking pretty good! Keep rocking!

Florent Perrin:

Good good intentions, but think you've missed a little "something" to make it more efficient. Good start anyway!

Lauren Wells:

Cool work here! One thing I noticed is the hand placement on the head... it does not really feel like it's making precise contact .

Aaron Clement:

Good, a little cliche at the end, though.

Tania Vincent:

i love this. the best i've seen. Lovely lines of action and nice rhythm and a great thought process. Espexcailly when she sighs.
10 out of 10

Gregory Marlow:

The pose on town doesnt really make a lot of sense to me. Looks a little fonze/elvis. rest is pretty good though.

Traci Plagmann:

Really good job. Nice gestures and acting. It would be great to try to break up the twinning on the last couple of gestures.

Jace Bandalin:

You've done a very nice job putting the actions and holds on the key words used in the dialog, it makes the acting really stand out in this shot. Very nice job!

Christian Leon Christensen:

Love the fingertapping on 77-90..

P Walters:

Very nice. Very fluid, I like the finger tapping on the table, nice involuntary action. Good eye movement.

miles southan:

Looks good but the fingers, eyebrows and arcs need attention. Also, not sure why she does the look screen left at the beginning.

Virgil Mihailescu:

the gesture on "in a town" looks like this:
http://mustec.bgsu.edu/~virgil/animation/analysis/headtilts/05.jpg
(yayayaya, I don't have a link to the exact pose, but it's around there, on that shot, like a second or so earlier, I think, you can see it on the trailer. but anyway, that's the attitude that reads from this gesture). you've captured it ok, even with the eyebrows, hehe, but I'm not sure it makes sense in this context.
anyway, the animation flows nice, with some exceptions in the upper body here and there, where it looks a little robotic. but I like the expressions and the lipsync. and that tapping on the table is cool :D

Pascal Immerzeel:

Good subtle work. Very nice.

Taber Dunipace:

One or two rough spots in the acting but over-all very strong. Weakest are the table taps which happen too fast, and the sitting up.

Robert Tighe:

The finger tap on the table put this one over the top.In a good way.

Alonso Soriano:

animation is technically really solid, good arcs, good timing and favoring, good transition from pose to pose. The acting performance is a little disjointed, the gestures she makes don't feel internally motivated or purposeful, feels more like she's striking poses a little bit instead of trying to express herself, I think it would help if there were a better sense of who she was talking too (herself or someone else) and what is the goal she is pursuing in talking outloud.

Mike Courtney:

Nice work. I would have liked to see a bit more movement in the spine at the beginning.

Derek Mabson:

Nice staging and execution. On the gasp the animation does something weird in there w/ the left arm and torso. I would also focus on the fingers for they seem stiff, mainly on the left hand.

Ryan King:

I almost wish you kept her head on her hand and her other hand on the table till the very end. You had the face nailed. It is a quieter subtler scene but the beginning movement seems to be so matter of fact. "Living in a town. I have no wish to live..." There is an emphasis on town, but to me the real emphasis is herself. By putting the emphasis on the town you don't worry about her, but I see her as the problem. She is just blaming the town... am I making sense or do I sound crazy? The other thing that gets me is the pantomime. Almost everyone put their hands on their chest when she said I have not wish to live. We all can see her so we understand that I is her.

Kyle Mohr:

Good job on the first part, I like the gesture at the beginning on "town". It gets a little confusing right before she starts whispering... Instead of raising her vertically, why not reverse her line of action to the left completely, so she faces to screen left by the very end? I think it would add a lot more contrast and simplify the middle/ending poses. The hands to the chest work well, but I think you could get away with only 1 or 2 poses at the end.

Good work!

Eric Stirpe:

Great fluid movement between poses, but the poses chosen don't really make sense with the dialogue, in my opinion..

Daniel Broverman:

Hits "town" a little hard but nicely done. That hand tap is great, good stuff.

Erik Griott:

the double tap on the table seems a little unnecessary.

luis veiga pumar:

pose on 'town' frame 25(ish) feels wrong, reminds me more of a joey 'how you doing' pose.

lipsinc is good, just poses need sorking on.

Christiaan Moleman:

The "town" gesture feels more like "heeeyy" to me, not sure about the tapping... I would do more of a moving hold at the end. Right now, all freezes except for the blink.

Dylan Maxwell:

good poses and gestures. I love the tap-tap on the table. Overall you should spice it up a bit. It's a little vanilla.

Carlos Fins:

I think what catched my attention to this is the posing.. the shoulders are too squared and even throughout the whole piece. Nice motions and mechanics, tho.

Jett Atwood:

Not bad, the right hand feels too busy. You don't need a gesture for every beat.