Final Rating: 5.39. Finished 24 out of 84 entries.

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Animator: Noyan

Description: Talking with his ex-criminal friend.

Experience: 7 months

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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Jamie F:

Could use some work on your ease ins and ease outs but some nice posing going on

Catherine Mullenger:

Nice framing.

The characters seem to move a little too 'all at once' pose to pose, it'd be worth delaying certain parts of the body and overlapping to make everything flow a little better.

With the hand slap at the end the visual hit usually works better if it preceeds the sound.

Amanpreet Singh:

LACKS GESTURE, SEEMED A LITTLE BORING

Kimberly:

I believe that this is on the right track once more time is put in for the inbetweens and breakdowns. The first 50ish frames is the direction I would go towards.

Jackie Nguyen:

Interesting fynamic!