Final Rating: 7.69. Finished 2 out of 84 entries.

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Animator: Vladyslav Patrauchan

Description: This is the situation when someone does not do that is required to do!

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 20 days after work

Comments:

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John M:

Excellent lateral thinking with the character on the phone. Very nice.

Sebastian Gonzales:

Very smooth!

Jamie F:

Very nice! Clever idea and nice subtleties! On first viewing I did find it confusing that you introduced a third off screen character at the end. Being picky, the lip sync could use a polish and be careful with the rig on the left as he can easily look cross-eyed.

Jakir:

Top 3 for sure..

Hardik:

Damn! I like the idea of two separate conversation mixing up. It actually solved this month's antman messedup dialogue problem. You split word so carefully. Good Job man!

TrendyGk:

Nice Job, Two conversation same time, perfect way of using the script.

Tushar Khandaria:

okay everything is amazing about it great work

Cola Dunn:

Great use of the script! Creative and funny and good movements and lip sync

Isabelle Dussault:

That's really good. The concept is super original and the animation is good. If I have something to say, I feel there's some errors in the lip sync.

Sierra Curry:

If feels like some of the lip-synch doesn’t match the audio. The idea is a little unclear. Are you suggesting a third man comes in at the end to say the last line? It’s a little confusing since there are only two voices in the clip.

84962C:

Nice work! Nice story! Must be top 3!

steven:

Love the cops hand motion and subtle moves of the crook

Michael:

Great job on this animation shot. My only critique is that Jack hand pose feel like he holding a gun instead of a smartphone. If you were to only see the pose in silhouette then you will see it look like he holding a gun.

here a image of someone holding a gun that look similar hand pose to jack holding his smartphone.
https://www.colourbox.com/image/beautiful-girl-gangster-holding-a-gun-classic-suit-and-hat-isolated-on-white-image-17147706

I would look up reference someone holding a phone. Also, I would like to see more of Mike facial expression. Maybe angle the camera where I can see his face more.