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Animator: Choong KahZhun

Description: A principle caught one of his students eating his lunch

Experience: Student

Time taken: 1 Month

Comments:

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John M:

Nice concept.

Jackie Nguyen:

I like the feeling tour were going for! That scene where he turns around is fantastic! I was a little confused where he was playing with his thumbs though.

Anne S:

Great animation but not sure it suits the audio

Edd Jones:

confusing as to there motivations.

Isabelle Dussault:

I feel like there is a good will to make the characters very expressive, but I think they work together as a whole. I also don't really understand what's going on. The base idea and overalp are good but the articulations snap too much.

Leonardo Rivera:

I feel like the story doesn't match the dialogue. Animation wise the principals arms feel unnatural and rigid. Great posing throughout the shot though.

Andi Pearson:

in the beginning, the movement was very smooth and acting was well expressed, though as the animation goes on some movements are overly fluid, like the principals hands when asking about dinner, or overly rigid, like the younger character's leg movements. Pretty solid and a great start