Final Rating: 4.95. Finished 35 out of 84 entries.

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Animator: Yohann

Description: A nice men have to kill a chicken for dinner but he can't.

Experience: 3 years at school and 4months at job

Time taken: 4 days

Comments:

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Sebastian Gonzales:

I like it! I think the movements are a bit floaty however which makes the character seem like they're balloons full of air.

Catherine Mullenger:

Love the chicken.

The hit on the table is slightly out of sync with the audio. Try placing the visual hit before the audio hit, just by a couple of frames.

The cleaver in the human characters hand seems to lack a little bit of weight. Delaying the action might be a way to sell this a little more.

Hardik:

Talk Topic doesn't match the turkey chopping.
I'm sorry I didn't notice that on wip post.
-- Ray's Eyes still in corner. Looks like he's looking at right side of that animal.
-- I liked that Scare in Turkey/chicken's Eye at the end.

Amanpreet Singh:

GOOD STAGING, BUT THE OVERALL ANIMATION WAS VERY SLOW. NEEDS IMPROVEMENT IN AUDIO SYNC IN SOME PLACES, OTHERWISE GOOD WORK.

Edd Jones:

Adding the chicken is nice touch. adding more chicken reactions would help this piece.

Leonardo Rivera:

The characters nose on the right has too much movement, its distracting. I think this shot could be better staged if the characters werent side view but shifted more towards the camera.