Final Rating: 4.24. Finished 51 out of 84 entries.

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Animator: Faiz Malik

Description: Any constructive feedback would be appreciated.

Experience: 8 months

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Amanpreet Singh:

THE TIMING OF THAT HAND THUMP SHOULD HAVE BEEN REPEAED WHEN HE PUNCHES THE TABLE, AND THE OVERALL ANIMATION WAS TOO SLOW, IT COUL HAVE BEEN A LOT BETTER

Kimberly:

Animation is decent however the overall flow is very slow. I feel that it could use some spacing and overlap clean up at portions. For example, the hands slapping to the table around f0 - f35. You could lessen the amount of frames used during that section.

Leonardo Rivera:

Camera movement is a bit too much, should be more subtle. Lip sync needs improvement but I think the main poses are decent.

Andi Pearson:

at first I wasnt sold on the singular character, but I absolutely loved then the gun appeared in frame. Really shows how comedy in film is shown through the reaction of a situation. The camera movement in the beginning felt a little unnecessary and out of place, and the lip synch could use a lot of work.