Amanpreet Singh:

THE GESTURES WEREN'T CLEAR ENOUGH, THE STORY IS CLAR YET NOT VERY CLEAR.

Kimberly:

This is an interesting idea however I would work more on simplifying the shot. It seems a bit too exaggerated.

Isabelle Dussault:

That's funny, but what we see is not what we hear. What I mean is the dialogue feels out of place with the action. The animation is a little bit too snappy too.

Stijn van der Plas:

I would recommend to use some different acting poses, I don’t think that I understand all the current ones, especially of the man in the chair. The movement of the character in the openings shot looks interesting though!