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Fluffy- Terror of the Underworld

by Alex Marek

Final Rating: 7.11. Finished 7 out of 104 entries.

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Animator: Alex Marek

Description: First submission to 11 Second Club. I am a beginner animator still learning about character acting and animation. There's a lot I would change, but I had a lot of fun making it! Great experience.

Experience: Beginner/Student

Time taken: 2 weeks, 1-3 hours per night

Comments:

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Brian W.:

Nice work. I'd like to know what software you used.

Laura Owens:

Very original setup and characters. The way the skeleton spins round to show off his pictures on the wall is great!

Shweta Chawre:

I liked the animation on the skeleton :)

Adam Gillespie:

I really like your use of the character and background making up the gag at 266.
I feel like your child character pointing in two different directions for "you and he" is too much animation here. It's a bit too literal and actually stands out for the wrong reasons. I think the idea and the second shot is pretty cool, but I feel like I wouldn't have your skeleton character spend so much time facing away from the camera. You could even animate him talking to the child whilst looking forwards, and then have him turn to his right into your pose at 220 and keep the rest of the animation as is. I would also give the child one last pose somewhere around 300-310, just have him/her lower their hands a little bit the same way they come up into the frame at 270.

Ruben Uggla:

Really well made, my only complaint is that the characters move perhaps a little bit too fast. Otherwise really well made.