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Really feeling it

by Erin

Final Rating: 4.44. Finished 61 out of 106 entries.

395 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Erin

Description: I know it's not finished but here

Experience: Not much lol

Time taken: A loooong time dude

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Skylar Zerr:

the pose on "Things" should happen on "Feel". It would add a lot of strength to this piece.

Jemal Meadows:

I like the animation overall. I do think the placement of the characters in the composition is a bit confusing though. On the parts where the therapist is talking I would maybe consider having the furniture that the other character is siting place somewhere behind him or maybe have him look to where the other character is instead of straight ahead.

Reyane Ashtar:

Don't be afraid to draw the body's of the characters multiple times. In other words, don't just animate the mouth moving on a still picture. Drawing more helps create really bodily movement that can help make the animation better to look at.