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Emotions are Unhealthy

by Filip

Final Rating: 6.31. Finished 10 out of 106 entries.

1,338 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Filip

Description: A troubled young man consults his doctor on the horrible burden of emotion and the state of his sick friend Marcus.

Experience: About 2 years now.

Time taken: Maybe a week and a half total?

Comments:

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Anonimator:

Cool style. Some of the dialogue seems to be missing from the lip sync and I'm not sure why the doctor pokes himself.

stick cardona:

unsync but nice

Andrea:

I like you animation! Good!

Yegane Moghaddam:

Finally! A respectable piece...
Really fluid and appealing animation, I simply enjoyed the design and the whole idea.
The beginning was surprisingly awesome, really didn't expect such creative idea, acting was great, staging was decent. My only little critique would be about the lip sync.

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:

i like it

Michaela Wadzinski:

I really love the colors, and sense of movement here

Jordan Lewers:

The doctor's reaction to being poked occurs a bit earlier than the actual finger poke, as if he's preparing to jab himself. It's just a bit confusing there. Also, it would've been nice to see the patient's jaw moving at the end, or a different camera angle so we could see his expressions clearer.

Jordan Barg:

Love everything about it (set up, animation, punchline), the only thing is the hand motion after he says "things", I don't get why/what he's doing and it stops too abrutly, needs more ease out. Lip sync is a bit off overall, smart to cover the mouth at the end to save time but would have been more clear if we could see his face.