Comments:
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Skylar Zerr:
lip sync. so many with weak lipsync and decent posing.
Erin Goddard:
body movements and lip sync feel like they need a little more definition but i really like the story and the framing of that last pose!
Kerem:
That gun should have weight
Jakub Kupčík:
I'm a bit confused about the secondary actions here. How does the case full of money and the gun relate to the dialogue? Makes no sense to me.
Jean Lamy:
Nicely done overall but there should be more of a downward motion from the gun when he picks it up. That would help show weight.
Darren Teh:
probably should tighten the timing a little...perhaps he could be looking where he is aiming at the end
Brian Heath:
I like the twist at the end (305). I wish there were more motion with the stack of bills (171)
Animator: Shao Wen Tan
Description: Ray has to make a choice about whether he wants to kill his boss, who murdered his close friend.
Experience: 3 years as student
Time taken: about 1 week