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"I Know You Killed Him..."

by Shao Wen Tan

Final Rating: 5.00. Finished 45 out of 106 entries.

487 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Shao Wen Tan

Description: Ray has to make a choice about whether he wants to kill his boss, who murdered his close friend.

Experience: 3 years as student

Time taken: about 1 week

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Skylar Zerr:

lip sync. so many with weak lipsync and decent posing.

Erin Goddard:

body movements and lip sync feel like they need a little more definition but i really like the story and the framing of that last pose!

Kerem:

That gun should have weight

Jakub Kupčík:

I'm a bit confused about the secondary actions here. How does the case full of money and the gun relate to the dialogue? Makes no sense to me.

Jean Lamy:

Nicely done overall but there should be more of a downward motion from the gun when he picks it up. That would help show weight.

Darren Teh:

probably should tighten the timing a little...perhaps he could be looking where he is aiming at the end

Brian Heath:

I like the twist at the end (305). I wish there were more motion with the stack of bills (171)