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Advice to Feel things

by Florencia Irena

Final Rating: 5.52. Finished 31 out of 106 entries.

431 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Florencia Irena

Description: A woman who apparently living a hard life make her turn into a rough person that thinks feelings is just waste of time. but then she realize that she do care about her lil brother Marcus after having little conversation with a wise old man.

Experience: -+ 2 years of collage

Time taken: -+ 10 days

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

mike:

too dark

juan francisco leon:

a smoth light on them will get it better

Sergio Candela Ramirez:

I like the lighting but the animation can be improved

Skylar Zerr:

There is a lot to improve here. I'll leave you with one tidbit that will ad a lot more life to your characters instead of them feeling like dolls.

Eye darts happen on 1 to 2 frames maximum. good luck!

Reyane Ashtar:

The lighting of the animation made it really hard to view to people and their emotions. Maybe brighten it up! But overall, it's pretty good.

Kerem:

girls movement at "i guess not" feels too much and sudden for the scene and audio,

girls hand movement at the 29 can be synced with the "shut" could be more appropriate i guess

Jean Lamy:

Good animation overall, the scene is a bit too dark to see her lips move in the beginning. The second character was nicely animated with very few poses. One thing is that he should still be looking at her at the end. Well done though.

Anonimator:

I like the direction you went with the acting. The lighting is pretty dark though, so it's hard to see the facial performance and silhouettes clearly.

Chris Clarke:

Very dark. It's difficult to see your animation.

Andrea:

I like it!
to much dark, it loses a little bit!

Muhammad Arsal:

wow!

Jordan Lewers:

I'm finding it very difficult to read her expressions at the end since the lighting masks her face

Darren Teh:

Too dark to see much