Final Rating: 2.54. Finished 143 out of 151 entries.

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Animator: tohid razpoush

Description: excuse me

Experience: about 1 month with learning

Time taken: 1 years-self teaching

Comments:

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Robert Zhou:

There needs to be more movement! The characters are too stiff. Keep working at it!

Nikolas Diamant:

They look too stiff, the first guy's shoulders should be down a bit, and they should both move their torso's more

Richard Clark:

Too floaty all around. I would also recommend shooting reference next time.

Nathan Greensmith:

There doesn't seem to be much to this animation and the lip sync needs work, The scene and background is nice though. good effort, keep practicing.

Ben Halstead:

Framing is pretty good but the lip syncs need a lot of work, and some amount of gesturing, however subtle, would help immensely.

Bruno de Coninck:

I think you could try to move your character a little bit more. Even with a very minimalist shot, someone who talk, wil have some micro moves, expressions, etc. For now, there are some moves, but they don't seems to fit the feelings of your characters. I strongly suggest you to try to use references, particulary on very subtile moves.

Kyra Toomey:

Lip sync is to be desired, needs clearer mouth shapes