Comments:
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Robert Zhou:
Around frames 100-200, the character on the right seems a bit floaty. Otherwise, it looks pretty decent!
Nikolas Diamant:
You should work on the eyes
Eric Raffle:
'yes' part the mouth didn't need to be so wide open
Bruno de Coninck:
Pretty good. The moving hold seems a bit floaty but it is a detail. I would also like to suggest you to add some speed contrasts. Your animation would improve a lot with that.
Ben Halstead:
Not bad. It's a bit floaty... I would focus on pushing your poses
Nathan Greensmith:
Good poses, good animation. Character two seems to zone out and stare into space a bit, not sure if that's the intention. But still nice work.
Kyle Novak:
no real concept.
Animator: Kimberly Yong
Description: feel confusing
Experience: diploma student
Time taken: 4weeks