Comments:
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Bruno de Coninck:
The motions are too slow. Overall, the animation is very floaty. Also, the lipsync is over animated. Don't animate every phonems and use a reference to see how you pronounce the words.
Nikolas Diamant:
You should make their feet go lower while they're stepping
Richard Clark:
Ha! Nice idea!
Frost Seven:
hahaha i love it! great lip sync and timing!
Tyson Haeh:
Lip sync could use some work
Nathan Greensmith:
Good plot, great looking characters. Movements and need a tiny bit of refining, but overall nice work.
Jerry Jones:
Beginning: Her situation.
Middle: Taunting.
End: Hero arrives.
I enjoyed it very much!
Lee:
Really like the design and background. However one thing maybe to focus on is the lip sync, its a bit mumbly (try for strong, clear mouth shapes) and the body acting is a bit floaty at times. Also check your walk in the beginning but overall nice work I really enjoyed this piece!
Animator: P Carey
Description: Wilfred to the rescue...
Experience: some
Time taken: couple weeks