Richard Clark:

I'd recommend shooting reference next time.

Nathan Greensmith:

Good poses, movements seem a bit too fast, but good work.

Bruno de Coninck:

Good start, but some of your posess are hard to read. The arme motion is also a bit weird, particulary with the up vector (or pole vector if you're in maya). The arms seems to have a weird angle. Same for the wirst

Kyle Novak:

The first mans movement is strange and unbelievable.

Samidha Kumar:

The idea is good but the execution needs a lot of work, Mainly on the poses and inbetweens.

Ben Halstead:

Good work, just seems incomplete or in need of smoothing out - keep it up!

Kyra Toomey:

Great antic when the second character turn around but the over shoot settle is a bit much. Soften it a bit (more frames slowing in and out) and tone down/ take out the second overshoot before "Wilfred the merciful", it's a bit springy.