Final Rating: 3.76. Finished 92 out of 151 entries.

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Animator: Rory McGrath

Description: Convince him to make the Call

Experience: Little, First Entry

Time taken: 10 days in spare time

Comments:

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Bruno de Coninck:

I see Malcolm! Malcolm everywhere! Lol! More seriously, it is not bad but I think that the reaction of the white shirt guy is a bit exagerated. I think that the black shirt blond guy could be more invasive. The lipsing is a bit too much. Basically, it looks like you tried to animate every single phonems. It is a fairly common mistake. Try to film yourself just saying those sentenses with a close up of your mouth and you'll you don't articulate everything. Personally, I use a miror on my desk to check how I pronounce every words before animate them.

Nikolas Diamant:

The audio seemed like 5-10 frames off

Ben Halstead:

Make sure to use reference before animating

Carlos Guadarrama:

Lol middle finger

Nathan Greensmith:

Great emotion, good poses, animation is a bit jumpy and abrupt. But good work,

Kyle Novak:

too much, too fast.