Nathan Greensmith:

Good scene, bit floaty animation in parts but good effort.

Bruno de Coninck:

It is a good start, but it would need a lot of polishing : not enought ease-in and ease-out, the moves are not nearly fluid enought. Just polishing could improve your work a lot.

Kyra Toomey:

Hold your poses a bit more firmly. The characters always moving and feals a touch floaty. Have some more expression in the second guy, he doesn't have any personality. Nice acting though, especially at the beginning when he pushed the phone over with 2 fingers.