Final Rating: 5.53. Finished 31 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Pauline Champetier

Description: This is my first entry, I learnt a lot from doing it and I hope you'll like it !

Experience: animation student for the past 2 years

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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Ben Crouse:

Nice staging and solid drawing skills. I think you're going for a subtle performance but I wonder if there is room to push things a little further to make it more entertaining.

Roger Crown:

The first shot is staged properly,,,but the second could have a camera truck out or both char's within the shot at the camera pulled back about 5 feet so we can see the monstrous big guy in the background better for the end gag....Thanks and yes I fully expect to see more from you within these competitions....

Carlo Nicoletta:

Looks good. I like his little intake before he gives his final line. I think you could speed up his turn a bit. The speed of that action doesn't seem to match the tone/defensiveness of his voice while he gives the "no I did not" line. Another take that might work would be to have him turn more quickly and raise his screen right arm up and to the left while giving a subtle shake on the head side to side. You could probably slow in his hand to a nice move and hold and then swipe it across to the right on "not!". Good job.

Himadri Sekhar Dhali:

nice!!

Michael Minasyan:

it woman voice

Ryan D Lowe:

Simple, and clean. I like it. Could use some texture.

Omer Sharon:

graet acting! and animation!
only thing is- i dont know if its just me or not- but i didnt understand the background was a huge hand, untill now :0