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HE JUST SAVED THAT FISH!!!

by Vinu Nair

Final Rating: 5.02. Finished 53 out of 201 entries.

31 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Vinu Nair

Description: Father caught his son trying to eat fish which he just took from the fish bowl,and the boy realised that he get caught and keep the fish back into the bowl.:)

Experience: 3 and half years

Time taken: 80 hours

Comments:

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Danny Kneip:

Not the perfect marriage between sync and audio - the mouth shapes are very awkward. A pity, because it's a fun idea with a great opening shot. The child character just doesn't have the range of expression desirable. Also, the high-angle shot at F184 is NOT the perspective of the Malcolm character, so I'm not sure who the child is looking at, but it's very distracting. Everything before F184 is well done!

Amartya Mukherji:

very nicely done but there is a sound and animation offset. Plz check your edit.

Gabriel:

the grin on f216 is too fast...cant read the emotion

Ryan D Lowe:

The lip sync for this need a lot of work. I like the character and the "awwww" pose for the eating of the fish.

Avinash Kharat:

very good